My stalwart cactus
Watches comings and goings
With little interest.

Bend closer to look
Jumping chollo throws its spines
!!Pincushion torso!!

A Zen-like prickle
In my deserted mindscape.
New subject: Cactus!

Notice the ingenious play on words in not one, but two places. My arm is nearly broken from patting myself on the back.